Can you explain what you mean by comment back ? Or do you want an explanation of what that means ?
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Those are both very good maybe you can try something like this:
At that moment it seemed everyone stood watching the line where heaven touched the earth. Their wide eyes witnessed the resounding glowing collision. Sparks lit the sky and blood poured, as the glory of paradise descended further behind the seam of the world. People looked back to the line, only a few bright streaks remained to signal heaven’s passing. The sun had set.
Does it state an argument? Do you prove that argument later in your paper? Is it authentic? Make sure it has your opinion that you give a brief why with
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Try to scan if u haven't already
