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slavikrds [6]
3 years ago
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How could this essay draft best be revised to clarify meaning and enhance style? A. Maintain a formal style. B. Use transitions

to clarify the flow of ideas. C. Clarify the topic and purpose in the topic sentence. D. Use evidence that supports the topic sentence more clearly.

English
2 answers:
ehidna [41]3 years ago
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answer:

i think this would be D, because there isn't much evidence present. everything else seems pretty okay.

hope this helps, but i am not sure.

Wewaii [24]3 years ago
6 0

Answer: Maintain a formal writing style, you all were wrong, thanks.

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