Answer:
Proper In text citation:
According to the American Tooth
Brigade, by eating greater amounts
of sugar “your teeth are at risk to
significant decay, which can affect
you as an adult" (ATB 15).
Studies have found that obese
children don’t typically exercise
outside of school (Kingston 47).
As childhood obesity rates continue
to be rise, scientists believe
that one important factor in
making a difference will be
“educating families, especially
in poverty-stricken areas”
(James 5).
Improper Citation:
Childhood obesity is a "complicated
and sociopolitical issue," and parents,
teachers, community leaders, and
governmental leaders can work
together to encourage youth to
make healthier decisions.
According to Avery, children who “often
eat salty foods when they’re young
develop a taste for it as adults,
leading to problems with sodium
and cholesterol." (12)
After studying children who watched
hours of television after school, one
researcher found that watching
several hours of television every
day was often linked to childhood
obesity and lack of physical activity.
