Hi !
"Pendant mes deux années de cours de français, j'ai beaucoup apprécié" is a little incorrect : it would means "during my two years of french class, I liked a lot". The begining is great ! but the question is what did you like haha. You could say "jai beaucoup appris" = I learned a lot" or "J'ai beaucoup apprécié mes deux années de cours de français" = I really liked my two years of french class"
Other than that, it's really good !!
I would just say that maybe replace "supporté" with "soutenu(e)" (put a "e" if you identify as a woman) because "supporter" is more like "tolerate" (even if that is technically correct haha)
Yeah that's it, well done, it's great ! Bravo :)
Hope you have a good day :)
