I believe there is only one comma in between limping and exhausted
The correct answer is A) IRRELEVANT AND SHOULD BE REVISED OR DELETED.
Topics sentences should support the thesis statement, so their relation with it should be clear and concise. Afterwards, each topic sentence can be further explained, exemplified or expanded. However, first of all topic sentences must summarize the main idea of the paragraph and show how it is related to the thesis statement.
- "about the claims : -
making a claim is just a fancy way of saying that you're stating your main point.' claims are not just opinions. a claim tells what you think is true about a topic based on your knowledge .
about the country claims : -
a counterclaim is just the opposite of a claim. counterclaims are also provable and supportable by reasons and evidence. not just, 'because i said so.' when you're planning an argument, you need to know what the counterclaim might be so that you can make sure that you disprove it with your reasons and evidence your research."
