Answer:
I would change "Martin's and his family" to "Martin and his family's" and "his family" doesn't need to be in parentheses.
I would change the first commentary sectence to "Martin's Grandfather speaks in sioux which is his native language." and go into futher explanation on what he "knows". It's kind of a cliff hanger.
For the second commentary sentence, you should make sure to mention who's grandfather you're talking about if they are multiple in the story. Also I would change the sentence to "The grandfather exhibits his culture while wearing traditional clothing. The traditional clothing is typically worn by people of his tribe."
For the last commentary sentence, I would change it to "The quote states that the males in the family still follow traditions because it will eventually be passed down through generations.
Explanation:
Answer:
i think the question is asking to write about a picnic so:
Explanation:
It was a bright sunny day, but I was determined to have this picnic with Thomas, so I made sure to bring a big glass of cold water, fresh juice and an extra child (do u mean ice) cold drink. I also brought lots of cold fruits including a sweet watermelon, a red apple, some ripe baby carrots, and some green grapes. Aside from the fruits I brought us some chicken sandwiches and some spicy BBQ to eat before we ate the chocolate cake for desert.
The answer to my best knowledge is C.
