The following sentence uses the vocabulary word correctly:
Right before we left the country and waved goodbye to our vacations, we thanked our hosts at the hotel for their hospitality, as they made us feel at home with their great disposition and kind reception.
<span>If I like it:
Yes, I like this poem. It seems/feels so intimate, yet somehow I feel connected to the character.
What emotions are there:
I believe the emotions a reader would feel would be sorrow, pity, despair, grief and helplessness because he/she has no power to help the abused.
What I would add to make it better:
I probably wouldn't, perhaps start posting it publicly to sites like 'Wattpad', to get a wider perspective from public comments.</span>
