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First: Check for spelling or grammar mistake, and fix those. Second, check the formatting and structure, you could have the most perfectly grammatically correct piece of writing, ruined by the fact that nothing is in order. Thirdly, look at words and phrases to make sure you are not using any ambiguous language.
Plagiarism is when you copy someone else's work (usually word by word) and you do not acknowledge that you where not the person who wrote it, also, you do not cite where you received that info from. That is why we have copyright laws, where the author can choose whether to establish a penalty if copied.
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Do you agree or disagree with this point of view?
I disagree with this point of view.
Find evidence from the story to support or refute the student's claim. In your response, clarify why you agree or disagree with the student's thoughts.
Ravi is a character in the short story "Games at Twilight", by Anita Desai. He and his siblings are playing hide-and-seek when he decides to hide in the shed where old furniture and broken things are kept. Ravi is excited about the idea of winning the game. He is motivated by picturing himself as a champion who got to win over older, smarter kids. After hiding for hours, he comes out and runs to the "den" to become the desperate winner of a game that had been long over. His siblings had forgotten about him.
Upon this awful realization, Ravi feels completely isolated. He is obviously a young child who is still insecure about his place in the world. That's why he is so desperate to win - to prove something to himself and others. But the fact that he was forgotten is utterly disappointing and hurtful. He does not feel included; he does not want to be included anymore:
<em>And the arc of thin arms trembled in the twilight, and the heads were bowed so sadly, and their feet tramped to that melancholy refrain so mournfully, so helplessly, that </em><u><em>Ravi could not bear it. He would not follow them, he would not be included in this funereal game. He had wanted victory and triumph—not a funeral. But he had been forgotten, left out, and he would not join them now. The ignominy of being forgotten—how could he face it? He felt his heart go heavy and ache inside him unbearably. He lay down full length on the damp grass, crushing his face into it, no longer crying, silenced by a terrible sense of his insignificance.</em></u>
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<em>He</em><em> </em><em>is</em><em> </em><em>g</em><em>oing</em><em> to</em><em> </em><em>sch</em><em>ool</em><em> </em><em>hop</em><em>e</em><em> </em><em>it</em><em> </em><em>h</em><em>elps</em>
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A simply because its the only one I think seems right!
