C. I will illustrate my point about being clumsy with many examples from my life.
The importance in the opening scene is that it is able to show devotion and friendship in the first characters that has been shown in the merchant of venice, created by Shakesphere. The characters are namedly, Antonio and Bassinio. They were able to show their friendship in the opening scene as a strong and devoted relationship and how they were able to show it with the given scenarios.
Answer:
I love going to the zoo with my dad. Many of the animals are cool and we like looking at animals especially lions. <u>because</u> (lions are big and strong and strong animals are scary) (Change : They are tough and ferocious, which makes them scary)<u> </u><u>in real life</u> but when they are in a cage it isn't so bad. <u>but</u> I would never want to be put in a cage because I would get sad. <u>so</u> (I don't know if the animals are happy or sad but) (change : Uncertain if the animals will feel happy or sad themselves) my dad (says)(change : said) that the animals at the zoo are very well taken care of and i shouldn't worry about them.
Explanation:
I added brackets to the parts where i changed the sentenced, underlined the parts I would cross out and bold the periods.
Where it says change : don't add that in the sentence.
Miss Maudie tries to explain Atticus's excellent marksmanship and his lack of pride in it. ... She tells Scout and Jem good things about their father (Atticus).
