He was in the room to be in the room with the room
Answer:
Making homemade ice cream involves gathering the right ingredients, carefully regulating temperatures, and the creation of friction
Explanation:
strong thesis statements (and essays in general) should not include phrases like "you will learn..." and "this essay is about...", and the first thesis statement is rather an opinion and not a fact.
The second statement not only provides an elaborate yet short answer on how to make homemade ice cream but is also based on facts.
A-he will punish wrongdoers
1. summarize the plot briefly (the readers of the critique need to know what the story is about)
2. briefly give author's background (it may have an effect on the story)
3. give strengths and weaknesses (you need to show both the good and the bad parts)
4. point out examples of style (style is also very important in stories)
5. identify characters (you are going to critique their portrayal anyways)
6. make the conflict clear
7. recommend to certain type of reader (so that other readers know this isn't something they'd like)
He shows that even if you have a good relationship/friendship with someone it can be spit up by something like gangs
