You can revise your claim to make it sound more original or specific by changing the hook to a very different but still effective one, you should have different types of redirect to stand out
Answer:
He feels like an outsider and he enjoys a moment with the boys
Explanation:
the fact that he can begin enjoying the other players is because he is more familiar with them and can be himself
The book twilight by Stephanie Meyer
Meyer, Stephenie, and Young Kim. Twilight. London: Atom, 2009. Print.
She understands me & loves me unconditionally no matter what I do.
