To judge whether or not a conclusion is successful, simply look back in the story and try to relate things in the story with the conclusion. Depending on what you find will determine whether or not the conclusion is successful.
Explanation:
I have found interpunction mistakes in lines:
- in ''Something, or somebody I know is worth my time'' There should be no comma interpunction after ''Something''.
- ''When you're broken down, and have the same pain you've felt a thousand times.'' There should be no comma after ''Down''.
Also, another mistake that I have found is in:
- ''Who does good, loves, and never ever lies.'' The mistake here is in ''never ever''. There should be no ''ever'' word because ''never ever'' is creating a tautology.
Answer:
B Fear tormented and controlled Díaz until he no longer allowed it to
Explanation:
The text is from the autobiographical account of Junot Diaz where he tells the story of the intense fear he felt after a vicious beat down by kids on a rough neighborhood.
After that beating, he had an intense fear of the three boys and whenever he saw them coming, he would get away fast, and they would jeer and taunt him which would make him distraught and depressed for days until he decided to face his fear of the boys and the day he saw them, he did not run even if he wanted to. He could not approach them either, he stood still and faced them, and eventually they scowled at him and walked past.