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nikdorinn [45]
3 years ago
14

Can someone edit this short essay... make it sound smart, please :)

English
2 answers:
oee [108]3 years ago
4 0

before I start what is the topic?

stepan [7]3 years ago
3 0

Answer: 1)Kicking and scoring a ball in a net is not as critical as saving lives. To me, soccer will be deemed overrated. When it comes to cheering for their team, many fans have issues. It triggers many disputes, such as shaking hands, which can not be resolved by a simple solution. Sports are not worth a heart attack or an increase in blood pressure, particularly soccer. Those who score in a soccer game gain more money than the wages of a doctor who saves human lives every second of the world's time. [2] Watching soccer games or becoming a fan of any form of sport does not cause the blood pressure to decrease or rise, based on my experience. Conflicts are increasing between a team and another team, and Against other instructors, instructors. Some don't take into account that we don't live eternally on earth, so there's no need to waste time worrying about a lost game. [3] To minimize terms, locations, and even positions, "overrated" is also used. I agree that the reputation it is provided today is not earned by soccer. Most of the time, I know of famous soccer players who can score goals twice in a row than I know of doctors who have scored a big goal by saving the lives of people who have been on the verge of losing their lives.

(hope it was good enough :) )

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