1. H
2. H
3. N
4. H
5. H
6. H
7. H
8. H
9. H
10. N
✓ The revision that would most likely improve this paragraph is "the elimination of passive language. "
Yes and no depending on how strong if an argument and the topic
Answer: C
Explanation:
'we' is a plural pronoun
plural being more than one, the use of this word shows readers that they are the same and brings them together.
This makes the speech more personal and encourages readers to support him.
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