There was a blood curdling scream and then the noise of the cats crying stopped. The sinister silence in the empty neighbourhoos sent chills down my spine as I increased my pace to reach the (insert place) .
you continue.
D. The sentence contains a typo. "Past" is the wrong spelling. It should be "Passed"
Another: "The opposing sides lit up the air with speeding bullets as... ( whatever was happening)" Try to describe the scenes/actions and use figurative language.
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