I arrived in THE USA
Flew over THE alps
Quick stopover at London
We left for New York
THE time on board wasn’t boring
Films to watch on THE monitor
THE people on THE plane were all Italians
We saw THE Statue of Liberty, Eillis island and THE Empire State Building
THE hotel I stayed at was on the corner of 42nd street and 5th avenue.
I don’t like THE hotels here very much but I didn’t have time to rent an apartment
Answer:
The revision which is the best example of adding concrete detail is:
Claire Innes was separated from the people around her during the fire and she later found them near the same place they were separated.
The other options do not apply because the original sentence does not talk about Claire Innes' parents or family
Claire Innes became separated from her parents as the flames spread through the city, and she later found them.
In the panic, Claire Innes was separated from her family as they fled, and she was reunited with her father after the fire was extinguished.
In the panic, Claire Innes became separated from her brothers and sisters during the fire and she later found them after the fire was put out.
Explanation:
1 page: was, knew, to know, loved, went over, walked into, tinkled, call out, stop, to give, smelled, had, fell, would ask
2 page: find out, rush over, kept, would close, open, point, landed on, was, helped, didn't understand, sounded out, picked, knew, to know, wrote down, carried, went
