Every month Lily goes to the orthodontist to get her braces tightened, afterward her mom gets her a milkshake because biting int

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Every month Lily goes to the orthodontist to get her braces tightened, afterward her mom gets her a milkshake because biting int

o hard foods is too painful for her. What is the best way to correct the sentence? Every month Lily goes to the orthodontist to get her braces tightened afterward her mom gets her a milkshake because biting into hard foods is too painful for her. Every month Lily goes to the orthodontist to get her braces tightened, her mom gets her a milkshake because biting into hard foods is too painful for her. Every month Lily goes to the orthodontist to get her braces tightened; afterward, her mom gets her a milkshake because biting into hard foods is too painful for her. Every month Lily goes to the orthodontist to get her braces tightened afterward; mom gets her a milkshake because biting into hard foods is too painful for her.

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2 answers:

Aleksandr [31] · Answer 1 · 2022-04-30T22:59:50+03:00

Answer:

Every month Lily goes to the orthodontist to get her braces tightened; afterward, her mom gets her a milkshake because biting into hard foods is too painful for her.

Explanation:

This sentence shows that after Lily gets her braces tightened, her mom gets the milkshake for her.

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horrorfan [7] · Answer 2 · 2022-04-30T20:36:05+03:00

horrorfan [7]3 years ago

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Answer:

it's the second one

Explanation:

the: Every moth Lily goes to the orthodontist to get her braces tightened, afterwards her mom gets her a milkshake because biting into hard food is too painful for her.