Hi! You did a great job! There are just corrections I'd like to make.
Tomorrow's the big day, my dad and I are moving to America. I’m not looking forward to it for many reasons. First off, I will have to go to a new school and what sucks even more is I’m joining in the middle of the school year! The second is that I will have no friends and I will know no one there. All I know is I am not gonna like it there and still don’t know why we can’t just stay here in New York where I actually have friends. I go downstairs and my dad’s on the phone. Then, I go over to the fridge and open it to finding nothing there. I go over to the counter and take out my phone. I see my friends have posted pictures of themselves with their boyfriends. I put my phone down and go upstairs. I was done with packing so I decide to take a nap. I wake up and check my time on my phone. I slept for one hour! I decide to meet with my friends since it is my last day here.
Here you go! I corrected it from the other one. Hope it helps!
‘Whoever among you wakes up physically healthy, feeling safe and secure within himself, with food for the day, it is as if he acquired the whole world’
