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ladessa [460]
3 years ago
5

Hey what do u guys think

English
2 answers:
olga55 [171]3 years ago
8 0

Hi! You did a great job! There are just corrections I'd like to make.

Tomorrow's the big day, my dad and I are moving to America. I’m not looking forward to it for many reasons. First off, I will have to go to a new school and what sucks even more is I’m joining in the middle of the school year! The second is that  I will have no friends and I will know no one there. All I know is I am not gonna like it there and still don’t know why we can’t just stay here in New York where I actually have friends. I go downstairs and my dad’s on the phone. Then, I go over to the fridge and open it to finding nothing there. I go over to the counter and take out my phone. I see my friends have posted pictures of themselves with their boyfriends. I put my phone down and go upstairs. I was done with packing so I decide to take a nap. I wake up and check my time on my phone. I slept for one hour! I decide to meet with my friends since it is my last day here.

Here you go! I corrected it from the other one. Hope it helps!

liubo4ka [24]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

Contact me when you're famous, OK??

Explanation:

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