I don’t get it what it the context
to get a message across to the audience and such things as certain themes they want to raw attention to.
I think you did really good this was a really eye opening topic really the only thing I have to say is you might want to change to summarize to to conclude it sounds more appealing other than that I don't really have any corrections.
As there is no passage to compare to Poe´s story,here is a list of some characteristics of Gothic literature that may help you to compare both texts:
The main traits of Gothic literature are mystery and the presence of supernatural elements. Like in the "the Raven", Gothic style aims at creating a mood of fear, anxiety, terror and /or horror by playing with reality. The reader will soon be questioning what is written.This chaos of intrincate plots is narrated in an elaborate writing style.