I would also go for cliche.
For question One. . .
no doubt E. Under the Red, White, and Blue
For question Two. . .
B. Jordan (in chapter one I believe that Jordan tells this to Nick when Tom recieves a call during the dinner they were in together. . .)
Answer:
Add clear and logical transitions between ideas and replace words and phrases with other that are more concrete
In my opinion there isn’t, but maybe change warm to warmth in the first paragraph?
