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arlik [135]
3 years ago
14

Can some one proof read and give suggestions on my essay?

English
1 answer:
Leno4ka [110]3 years ago
8 0

Answer:

OMG THIS IS LITERALLY AMAZING

Explanation:

But in the last paragraph maybe you shouldn't start the first sentence with because, but this is just my opinoin.

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