The alliteration is that she's telling you how her life was and how some days it was good and other days it wan't so good. She uses alliteration because she wants her reader to know how days were during her life. Although she wasn't a slave she still had a hard life and the alliteration she uses represents that and how she wishes things were easier and she's saying that life was hard for folks back then. I hope this helps.
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Queen Gertrude enters with tragic news ophelias, mad with grief, has drowned in the river anguished to habe lost his sister so soon after his fathers death
Change all the condensed words like wasn’t to was not to make it appear longer. try to give your own point of view and a conclusion sentence and why you chose what u chose