After painting all day, Josh took a break to relax.
I'd choose this dialogue to revise your sentence:
<span>“Did you hear?” I asked them. “My painting got selected! Exciting, right?” I smiled. “Especially given that I felt so incompetent at the beginning and that the competition was ruthless!”
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It feels like the option that best uses the dialogue to improve this sentence, because the other options are either too informal or just the same sentence as the original one.
Answer:
I would say Molly stepped confidently onto the bridge of the spaceship, surprising everyone with the badge that showed her new rank, then waiting for her salute.
Explanation:
Answer:
Tone creates a general feeling or attitude in a text which develops the author's approach to the subject matter.
Explanation:
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