Question

Does the following sentence belong in the body of a strong academic essay? Why or why not? "Another reason tenure should be eliminated is because it protects inadequate teachers, thereby reducing the overall quality of education."

Answer 1

Answer:

Yes

Explanation:

Why? A strong academic essay most importantly needs a strong thesis and the above is something of that nature. A good introduction that captures reader's attention coupled with a strong argument/thesis starts out the essay properly. By making the above statement in the first or one of the paragraphs in our essay's body, we are properly set to further develop the argument using supportive evidence and citing sources.