Answer:
This is such a pretty poem and I love it. I think where it says: That he leaves you so so stunned Do you try to get closer but end up getting burned
you should make that 2 lines, cut it off after the word stunned.
I also think that on the last line you should say in the night instead of and the night. Overall though this poems is amazing!
Apostrophe and Simile i think.
