"To" is a preposition and park is a noun
You need MANY MANY more commas. Stop using “you” as well. Don’t use “you” “me” “I” etc. Fix your grammar first and foremost, you’re missing a comma in almost every sentence.
You didn't provide the sentences, however, they probably contain things like vivid descriptions of things or their smells or how they feel when you touch them. If they are extremely realistic, then they are really vivid and this should be your correct sentence.