Answer: Isabel Glennie is the name of Evelyn's mother. Evelyn's mother Isabel recollects one incident when Evelyn was eight years old. She says that Evelyn was waiting for her turn to play the piano but when her name was called out, she did not respond.
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Answer: I think the second line is correct it you put a apostrophe in the first and before Simpson.
Explanation: The third line is also correct it is a I;I compound sentence. But the first line has some mistakes.