I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.
the audience rather than a character alone
Tybalt is Juliet's cousin, originally, Tybalt wanted to duel Romeo instead. But since he and Juliet are married, he cannot fight Tybalt as he is basically his cousin-in-law, thus, Romeo rejects Tybalt's challenge. Mercutio finds this quite cowardly as a result he himself challenges Tybalt to fight.
Answer:
The lines that do not have an imperative mood are "Passage Driving is a big responsibility. If you drive, there are many things you must do to make sure your car is safe to drive." One way to modify revising this passage to make it in the imperative mood would be: "Passage Driving should be a big responsibility. If you drive, you must do it to make sure your car is safe to drive ..."
Explanation:
A passage presents an imperative mood when, when the speaker of the passage is issuing an order or a request to the executor. Thus, the verbs used in the passage must be combined to express a request, invitation, exhortation, order, command, advice or supplication.
In the case of the above passage, the first two sentences must be modified so that the whole passage takes on an imperative tone, showing what a person must do to achieve an efficient direction.
