Imagery is not a structure of poetic element
Hooks is not needed in a body paragraph. It is only required in your introductory paragraph to make the reader want to read your writing piece in the first place.
The phrase, "she never smiled" might suggest that 'she' is sad, or unhappy based on her lack of showing those emotions through a smile.
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"Quickly" is an adverb since it is describing the verb, "sped."
It answers the question "how did it speed?" - It sped <em>quickly</em>.