Answer:
C. A score of two is best because, although the writing stays on task, there are some errors in spelling and grammar
Explanation:
So, two basic criteria for giving the score to this essay are focus on the task and spelling and grammar errors.
This is supposed to be a persuasive essay; it needs to convince the mayor in the need for a park. The author states the current situation, emphasizes the dangers of playing in the street, provides some expert evidence which suggest benefits of having a park and proposes a possible solution for the situation. Considering this, it's fair to say that the author stayed foccused to the task.
However, there are some errors found throughout the passage (they need to does instead of they need to do, he closest instead of the closest, les instead of less etc.)
With this in mind, it would be the most adequate to give this essay a score of two.
Answer:
it would be c because the person is saying that he is a miserable hunchback
Answer:
Ok, so basically a <em>really</em> short story about you getting what you wanted? Okay then.
Explanation:
"Wait, wait, wait...someone pinch me, quick! Is this <em>the </em><u>(whatever you want)</u>? Oh my god, thank you so much!" I said as I unwrapped the present. My brother didn't pass up the opportunity and pinched me, hard. I yelled at him, but inside I was still ecstatic. I had gotten <em>the perfect present</em> and now nothing could ruin my birthday, not even my pinching brother.
