Answer:
I think that the use of suspense in this paragraph is excellent.
It makes me want to read on and hear more about what happened to the old lady.
Explanation:
I like how you used the following words:
whirred
gently
clawed
grasping
wispy
sensible
woolen
rocked
move
I think they are very good words as they describe what is going on :)
I think opposite is the answer
Grandpa told me about his life growing up; when he was just 16, there was a job opening at the nearby car wash. His Mom and Dad wanted him to go and apply for the job, so he did. Grandpa Frank walked down the street and sat down for his interview. Then, the boss’s daughter walked out and sat in front of him. “What’s your name?” She asked. “Frank, and yourself?” He replied. “Grace, nice to meet you.” She smiled. Grandpa Frank was already noticing how beautiful the girl was. He wanted the job just to talk to her. The interview went on and Grandpa Frank went home until he was called a few days later being told he got the job! He was so excited & quickly went to work the next morning. Everyday he worked; Grace would talk to him at his lunch break. It was their own little dates. A few years later the car wash was shutting down due to going bankrupt. Grandpa Frank didn’t want to loose Grace; so on a cold, starry Tuesday night, he got on one knee & asked Grace to marry him. Grace quickly agreed then got married the next week. That’s the story how Grandpa Frank met Grandma Grace.
These two lines reflect the theme that men must never go against fate:
1. "I don't know what the first two was, but the third was for death. that's how i got the paw"
2. He wanted to show that fate ruled people's lives, and that those who interfered with it did so to their sorrow. He put a spell on it so that three separate men could each have three wishes from it."
Explanation: The actual lesson that Fakir wanted to teach is that fate ruled people's lives.
