The only wrong ones is the first on and the last one. The first one you forgot to put a comma after but. The last one you forgot to put a comma after eggs, pancakes, and things. I hope this helps you!
To get the readers to understand how the child feels
1.It is not wise to trust strangers, even when they promise to be loyal to you.
2.Ignoring the wisdom and experience of others can lead to terrible consequences.
3.You should never give up, even if you think a problem is impossible to solve.
4.You can overcome tragedy if you rely on your family and friends.
