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Hey there!~
I would say the best answer is Option B. With drafting you really shouldn't be trying your hardest... just kind of trying to get your ideas out. Once that's done you can start checking for mistakes. Kind of like how I did with this answer; I wrote it out, and then came back after I was finished and fixed all the imperfections.
Hope this helps!
~Fluerie
well, I guess it depends on what are you talking about.
are you referring to the impact that doing what you like with passion can affect other people's perspectives?
then you can say something like
"therefore, the passion shown by a person can affect or impact their perspectives, and even their motivation to achieve certain goals."