<span>Sentence (i) has been shortened in sentence (ii) by using an adjective.
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The chapter in The Iroquois Book of Rites contains information about the rules and regulations about of the Iroquois Nation can be found in chapter 6, 'The laws of the league'. When you are reading the book take notes and highlight any important information so that when you go to answer questions you can make references to the highlighted material.
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-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
<span>The only place for the topic sentence is in the beginning as its purpose is to attract readers so that they would like to read a work till the end. So, to answer your question, the topic sentence should never be in the last lines, where the conclusion <span>of the whole work is written.</span></span>
