I think the reason why the summary need to be revised is : C. the summary lacks transitions that connect ideas
For example, we need to add transition between -enkai wanted to save his cattle- and -He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth-
Answer:
Cholesterol is a fat-like substance derived mainly from animal fats that attaches itself to the walls of arteries causing heart disease.
Explanation:
<h2>filled with treasure, rocks, gold or some entrancing crystals that bewitch you the moment you glance at them</h2>
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Kamen gives the opinion that his equipment was complicated. He supports this opinion with facts; for example, he says that people "had trouble wiring it" and that he "spent several days" fixing it.
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This is just the example that ed uses, so I wouldn't suggest copying and pasting, but this should help. :)
Answer:
The question we can form using the information in the sentence and the word in parentheses is:
Whose grandfather had a small farm in the county?
Explanation:
<u>"Whose" is a pronoun used to indicate possession, be it in a declarative sentence or in an interrogative one. If I wish to know, for instance, who the owner of a car parked in front of my house is, I can ask: Whose car is this?</u>
<u>Since we are supposed to use "whose" to ask a question as well as the information in the given sentence, we need to find a possession relationship to ask about.</u> Of course, the farm has an owner - the grandfather. But the way the sentence is structure does not allow us to ask about him while using "whose". However, the grandfather "belongs", so to speak, to Roger, and the structure allows us to use "whose" to ask about him. Therefore, the question we can form is:
Whose grandfather had a small farm in the county?
