The correct version of these two sentences when combined is:
When we were in Europe on vacation, we usually flew on airplanes: however, sometimes we took the train.
We apply the semi-colon to indicate that they have different ideas, and that they are clauses being joined into one sentence.
To improve a conclusion, a writer must bare in mind that it should not address a new topic, that is to say, it has to be a recompilation of the topics already mentioned and developed in the paragraphs, so it has to be a kind of "summary", an overall of the topics and ideas discussed. It should be concise and the reader needs to be know it is the conclusion and you are not going to keep on working on the ideas, so sometimes, it is necessary to include the words "to conclude"/ "to round up"/ "in conclusion" or something similar on order to let the reader know you are about to finish.
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From Beowulf - Silzer's English Literature Twelve
