<h3>Following words have been edited in the passage :</h3><h3>On reaching his room he \Large{\bcancel{entire} \:entirely} </h3><h3>entire</h3><h3> entirely broke down, and became prey to the most violent \Large{\bcancel{agitation} \:agitations} </h3><h3>agitation</h3><h3> agitations .The vulgarity of those twins, and the gross materialism of Mrs. Otis,\Large{\bcancel{was} \:were} </h3><h3>was</h3><h3> were naturally extremely annoying, but what really \Large{\bcancel{distress} \:distressed} </h3><h3>distress</h3><h3> distressed him most was that he had been unable to wear the suit of mail.</h3>
When the Northern Hemisphere is tilted toward the sun, latitudes between the equator and 90°N (the North Pole) are experiencing summer. At the same time, the Southern Hemisphere is tilted away from the sun and experiencing winter.