As explanations for the audience, Krakauer cites certain letters such that they might visually understand whatever the Alaskans would have to tell. Citing this relates to the script also because audience now provides real examples of what was claimed by Alaskans.
I feel that there is a misunderstanding in the third paragraph of the essay. The writer talks about thesentence structure of the story and tries to tie that in with the topic of “suspense”. If the writer’s intentions
If I am correct the answer should be "<span>It is grammatically correct, but the parallel structure can be called into question in the second half of the sentence" hope it helps good luck </span>