Your paragraph is perfect except that you should not capitalize the word "mythology".
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where is the passage for this? I will try to help if you post it
Answer:
<u><em>Art influences society by changing opinions, instilling values and translating experiences across space and time. Research has shown art affects the fundamental sense of self. Painting, sculpture, music, literature and the other arts are often considered to be the repository of a society's collective memory. </em></u>
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