When a writer edits his/her own work, all four errors in grammar and usage listed above, need to be looked for.
a. Ways to replace overused words. A paragraph sounds clumsy when the same words are used too many times in a sentence/paragraph
b. Problems with verb tenses. It is very important to use the same verb tense throughout your written work.
c. Sentences missing commas and periods. If a sentence does not contain commas and periods, it is confusing and ends up being a jumble of words.
<span>d. Misused or missing capitalization.</span>
Answer:
The causes are Jim Crow Laws and Violence toward African-Americans, and your effects are more segregated neighborhoods, and the Harlem Renaissance
Is there a picture to go with it?
<span>#1) Which parts of this excerpt from "Editha" by William Dean Howells denote the meaninglessness of war?
Answer: I believe that the parts of this excerpt from “Editha” by William Dean Howells that denote the meaninglessness of war are the following: They think they'll come marching back, somehow, just as gay as they went, or if it's an empty sleeve, or even an empty pantaloon, it's all the more glory, and they're so much the prouder of them, poor things!" & "No, you didn't expect him to get killed,"
<span>I hope it helps, Regards.</span></span>
