The second one contains a capitalization error.
Answer:
The verb phrase is "have written."
Explanation:yeah
Essay:
I'd give the money to an organisation working on recovering the damage we did to Earth. That would have to be an organisation cleaning oceans, planting trees and teaching people about the importance of a sustainable and healthy environment.
I'd donate it to a small organisation, nothing too famous. A small group of people doing what they believe is right, working hard, to clear what other, brainless people, have done.
I'd hope that the money could be an incentive for them to continue doing what they do, and to continue gathering people into a movement our faith and the one of our planet depends on.
Notes:
- That is MY way of using easy-gained, extra 20k dollars. If you do not agree, please give me an idea of what you'd do and I'll hand in a better adapted essay.
- Since we're asked to write a descriptive essay, I tried to describe the organisation as much as I could. If you think you could add anything using the same thinking-line, please do.
Hope it helped,
BiologiaMagister
This sentence should be written using this tense:
By the time the movie was over, we had left the theater.
You need to use past perfect tense in these kinds of constructions.
