Question

Edit the following paragraph. Correct all run on sentences. Be sure to use proper punctuation and capitalization as necessary.

Answer 1

Next Tuesday, we are going on a field trip to Memphis to see Graceland. It will be interesting to see where Elvis lived. I am saving my money for the gift shop; therefore, I cannot let myself buy anything until then. The bus ride there will take us about two hours, so we are all going to bring our video games to play. We will visit Graceland in the morning. Then we are going to eat lunch on Beal Street. It is close to the Mississippi River, so we are going to go to Mud Island after lunch. I have been to Mud Island before. However, I am excited about going there again. We won’t have time to visit the Memphis Zoo or the Pink Palace Museum. We just don’t have time to do it all. My mom thinks we should have gone to the zoo or museum instead of Graceland, but I don’t agree with her. My friends and I are excited about our trip. We have worked hard to raise the money to pay for it. I think we will learn a lot of interesting facts about Elvis, and I know that Mud Island will teach us a lot about the Mississippi River. I love field trips; they make learning fun.