Um, which summary?
If you're talking about this;
Read the summary of the section of "The Beginnings of the Maasai," where the volcanic eruption and its results are described.
As a result of a volcanic eruption, Enkai and the cattle were thrown into the sky. Enkai wanted to save his cattle. He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth. The cattle walked down the tree to Neiterkob. Neiterkob and the Maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle.
Why does the summary need to be revised?
Then the answer is:
The summary lacks transitions that connect ideas
One you rent for a few day the other you stay at for a long periods of time
Answer:
write abt trenches, and how horrible it was, write about family waiting for their return
Premise is an assumption that something is true
Answer:
The industrial revolution is what brought out the scientific revolution. At that time machinery need to be made and you had to understand how to do it. Therefor it brought on the scientific revolution
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