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Alchen [17]
3 years ago
5

Can i have some good feed back on the story i am writing for my English Class...? You will be super helpful..!!!

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1 answer:
Kryger [21]3 years ago
4 0

Answer:

I really like it, seems cool!

Explanation:

good luck!

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