I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.
Huckleberry's role: He's the lead role and narrator of the story.
His personality: He's a free spirit, and takes notice in the world, but battles the rules of society and the voice in his mind.
That's all I can help with
Story name? I have no clue what your on about
The classic elements are time travel, teleportation, space travel, fictional world.. etc
