<u>Original sentences:</u> José received a college scholarship for baseball from Vanderbilt University. He has been playing for years. He will attend this fall.
<u>Correct</u><u> </u><u>combination</u><u>:</u> Playing for years, Jose who will be attending this fall, received a college scholarship from Vanderbilt University.
<u>Reasoning</u>
1. <em>since</em><em> </em>and <em>for</em><em> </em>cannot be used together for time depiction.
2. "..and attending this fall" seems incomplete due to incorrect use of tense.
<em>Hope</em><em> </em><em>this</em><em> </em><em>helps</em><em> </em><em>:</em><em>)</em>
C) The bells change from controlled to panicked
What is the sentence if I may ask ?
