I will give you a 50 50 chance the answer would be B or D.
Based from the paragraph, the sentence that Fatima's teacher will most likely ask her to revise is:
Having moved up north just last year, I experienced my first snowstorm this past winter.
Hope my answer has come to satisfy your query.
I won’t ever forget this experience
the police chased the thief
my friend gave me a gift
the principal taught history
denkar shouted at her sister
i paid the bill yesterday
pema pained the wall
jigme watched a football match
