Well, your cover page is very creative, while the original is kind of bland. Yours also shows all of the different traits that the characters have in the story, while the original does not. It could use a bit more color, but otherwise it's pretty good.
8 is in the place of 100'000
Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind
and therefore is winged cupid painted blind
hope this helps
A reasonable inference that one can make out of this poem is that you should not be worried about your fate, because at the end people are part of a generation which has its own struggles and at the end, people have to face their own destiny,being courageous, as the previous generations were and have been.
This is the reason why is possible to conclude that the two lines best linked to the theme are:
"Be comforted; the world is very old,
And generations pass, as they have passed"
