Can you please post the passage that you are referring to or a photo of the question to help me answer ir
A phrase or opinion that's overused and isn't original
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Maybe he was abused,bullied,seen murder, like the child must have seen something to be scared
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the last one because she joined the game
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I think it's an AMAZING story. You just need to fix some grammatical problems in the 2nd paragraph. Also, it would be great if you made a part two or something. (I want to know the backstory on what happened to Sasha.) Thank you for making an interesting story and for not using a overused ending. Good Luck with editing!