Yoo how does my essay sound?

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ch4aika [34]3 years ago

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Sounds really good, just watch your spelling

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Rufina [12.5K]3 years ago

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Okay, a few grammar errors, but pretty good. Maybe replace a few things, like "another reason why I think honesty is important" with "honesty is also important". And maybe find a synonym for honesty as well. Put it through grammarly and if you double tap a word, it will give you some synonyms for them, so you can sound more formal.

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